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Flamed Rhtymn

Mantle of summer, cloaked so bright Where flowers pose lending their grace. Along red vines as sun ignites My carefree notes that twirl, retrace The gleam of breezes dappling through On painted strokes with finest hue. How then can I resist The gush of wildness’ flow When come nightfall, hands lift To reach flamed moon aglow, Like vignette of night’s show... And tasting summer’s blaze Heated sighs I release, As blossoms now amaze With my notes that tease... One more dance While hips fling Of sweet romance; While through beats I'm a dizzy song! Contest:Who am I? Or, What am I ? Sponsor: SKAT

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Date: 2/12/2016 5:37:00 PM
Congrats Nette, on your placement in this contest. Keep up the hard work! RAY
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Date: 2/10/2016 5:04:00 AM
Beautiful , Nette. You should've been a poet.! LOL a well deserved high place poem for a special lady. Congratulations
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Date: 2/9/2016 11:51:00 PM
Nette, loving and enjoying this one all over again, thank you for the super XOOL Who AM I Support. A delight and head scratching contest. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 11/15/2014 7:16:00 AM
I have missed reading your poems. The images you create are magical. I am in for a very enjoyable morning catching up with you.
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Date: 10/28/2014 7:37:00 AM
The third stanza wowed me, its all good, great winner Nette :)
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Date: 10/27/2014 9:11:00 AM
Oh Nette, this is so good! Congrats!
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Date: 10/26/2014 7:28:00 PM
Wonderful and interesting piece,Nette..Congrats on your well deserved win in this contest...
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Date: 10/25/2014 8:02:00 PM
congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem, I've seen dancing with flames at my sons wedding, his wife is from columbia and the wedding party danced where the women had burning candles in the palms of their hands...
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Date: 10/25/2014 12:41:00 PM
Great to see this beauty shine...congrats Tim
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Date: 10/25/2014 11:41:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations. It's great that you received such high placing. Congratulations Nette
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Date: 10/25/2014 10:37:00 AM
The dance of summer, is captivating!! Lovely win, dear Nette! Congrats to you!
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Date: 10/25/2014 10:28:00 AM
Certainly, you reign supreme, as the scepter you seize is transformed into a magic wand. Lovely form and graceful rhyme.
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Date: 10/25/2014 10:13:00 AM
Congratulations to you! We all win too because we get to read your well written work.
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Date: 10/25/2014 9:51:00 AM
A nearly perfect write! Many congrats.
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Date: 10/25/2014 9:23:00 AM
Hi Nette, your poem is so beautiful and so full of imagery. I love the way it also rhymes. Congratulations on your top win! Sandra
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Date: 10/25/2014 7:29:00 AM
Congrats on ur top place on this amazing write Nette! U rock my dear!
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Date: 10/25/2014 6:00:00 AM
Nette...you whirl and you twirl in a most enchanting dance where imagery spills across these lovely lines. I am entranced! Congratulations on a top podium finish. // paul
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Date: 10/25/2014 5:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your big win with this jewel embeded write.
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Date: 10/25/2014 5:48:00 AM
A delightful write, nette, congrats on the win
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Date: 10/25/2014 4:20:00 AM
Absolutely stunning Nette - it left me in a trance! - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 10/25/2014 2:57:00 AM
Congrats Nette,truly irresistable like ,'' The gush of wildness’ flow...''
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Date: 10/25/2014 12:46:00 AM
Nette, so many stunning lines in this one, and I loved how you used rhyme as well. A real beauty. Congrats for second place in my contest.
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Date: 10/23/2014 3:11:00 AM
Yes it has brought me a trance. The journey to trance wow!! you can do it without any narcotic. Sooo good. hugs!!!-----rajat
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Date: 10/22/2014 2:39:00 PM
This is beautiful Princess, an absolute delight to read. The imagery is exceptional, and vibrant colours abound amidst the flowers you write about, and the last few lines are dreamy- your liege, James :)
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Date: 10/21/2014 1:07:00 PM
"How then can I resist The gush of wildness’ flow"; how can I resist the rapture of this poem? This just takes me away, Nette.
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