Flame of Life Dimmed

he sits in his well worn ragged shirt
head resting against the wire fence that surrounds him
dreaming of times when life was good.
when food was plentiful and clean warm clothes to wear,
when being free was the most important thing.

after many years of restriction, a rebellion began
he was a leader had fire in his  belly 
a heart full of hope. to what avail
they were so few in numbers 
yet they were driven by longing  and right
the corruption of their government was sacrilege.

after a long brave fight, he was captured
violently tortured, was to be executed in a few days,
his loyal band of followers already had met their fate.
so he sat and remembered, from his childhood, 
his one love, his family, his dreams, his longing
his rekindled flame of hope, kept him warm that night,
his last one, his work was done, the flame of life dimmed.

penned 22 March 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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April 6, 2016 at 10:58 PM
Seren, Nice to see your poem showcased in Justin's "Where Freedom Finds The Fire Contest List." PD
A. Sharma Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 2:30 AM
Congrats on a worthy win Seren..
Gazbowski Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 10:07 PM
A wonderfully crafted write Seren.
Roberts Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 6:34 PM
Lenny. Many thanks.......Seren
Sathasivam Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 4:03 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Roberts Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 6:35 PM
Hi Ravi. Nooooo thanks for reading and commenting......Seren
Smith Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 7:12 PM
A tale of oppression, hope, and dreams. I like how you carried us through all the different stages and the emotions in each Seren.
Roberts Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 6:38 PM
Tim. Nice to see you again. Thank you..... Seren
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