Flakes

Flakes


They said that he was a flake.
You know, strange in some way
that they could not grasp that did
not fit into the dictates of their ethnic
ghetto upbringing.  And so he rebelled.
Not against them, not against the
ghetto ghosts, but against the pressure
to conform to their ghetto-ness.

She was also a flake. You know the
type, strangely happy about being
alive.  Entranced by the movements
of a butterfly, raising her arms and
copying the butterfly’s motions.  Her
hair would just not obey the rules
of religious righteousness.  Nor
would her flirting eyes.

They were flakes, and as such, knew
that no two flakes are  alike.  They kinda
liked that, cherished the flakiness of
the other.  It seemed that they did not
march to any drummer, just meandered
to a music only they could hear.  It was
the rhythm of an unknown heartbeat,
the “whoosh” of a passionate pulse,
the warmth of life breathing.

They are older now.  They are still “Flakes”.
He holds her butterfly hand and they
mimic the movements of the wings
knowing that they, like the
butterfly, will soon be returning to
a transformative cocoon.


John G. Lawless
8/3/2014

Sorry Andrea couldn't keep it short.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Be the first to comment on this poem. Encourage this poet.

Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace