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flake Imagine if we were a snow flake Born up high in the sky Every flake a different make Falling down at different speeds How long it takes flakes have no breaks Question is do we hit the ground and melt away Or do we land on a snowball of love from heaven above

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Date: 4/20/2017 12:10:00 AM
Like the way it rhymes :)
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/20/2017 11:25:00 AM
Hi Debbie , thanks:))))
Date: 4/17/2017 10:08:00 AM
Fantastic rhyming. Very creative.
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/17/2017 10:25:00 AM
Hi Scarlett, thanks for your comment:))) hugs
Date: 4/14/2017 5:23:00 PM
Favorite line is the last one - "Or do we land on a snowball of love from heaven above" - Take care.
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/14/2017 5:36:00 PM
Hi Gail, Amen :) thanks for comment
Date: 4/13/2017 3:53:00 PM
Good write and good question, thanks for sharing.
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/13/2017 6:00:00 PM
Hi Pete, thanks for comment

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