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Five Lines of Love

Honey, your essence is to me Like some overpowering thing That sweetly brings a rhapsody The hummingbird might sing In search of homeward tree. 8/23/19 syllable count 88866 Writing Challenge 3, August 2019- Five Lines- Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode

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Date: 8/31/2019 10:21:00 PM
Janis, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge ~
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Date: 8/29/2019 12:58:00 AM
Congratulations, Janis. Last two lines are great imagery.
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Date: 8/23/2019 4:12:00 AM
The hum of love...A .sweet little write..
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Janis Thompson
Date: 8/24/2019 8:23:00 AM
Thanks Arturo.

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