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Five Letters

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My love, Jason, read this poem for me. Enjoy :)

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Sitting at the window Writing your name in the moisture Five letters Of longing Some days are better Than others Today is a bad day Trailing my finger over the letters of your name The window weeps and cries them away I breathe it moist again And write your name again and again Five letters and tears One day I will be better One day I will be safe enough to find you And I will tremble In your arms when you kiss me Five letters your name *** October 14, 2016

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Paul Dandrea
Date: 5/19/2017 10:13:00 AM
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"Writing your name in the moisture Five letters Of longing" It conjures the state of mind up for me.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/15/2017 8:43:00 PM
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"whoosh" the sound of my breath escaping me xomo
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Darren White
Date: 4/16/2017 1:20:00 AM
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I am glad you like it. This one is Jason's favourite :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/16/2016 9:58:00 PM
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It is heartbreaking when the one you love is not by your side.
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Darren White
Date: 10/16/2016 10:59:00 PM
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It's one of the hardest things, agreed. I'd give anything to be able to be with him. Thank you, Tim.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/16/2016 6:32:00 AM
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very nice ... well done ...
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Darren White
Date: 10/16/2016 6:48:00 AM
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Thank you so much :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/16/2016 4:29:00 AM
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Oh Darren so full of longing and the window weeping tears with the condensation is fabulous imagery:-) hugs jan x
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Darren White
Date: 11/26/2016 3:21:00 AM
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And with Jason's tears...
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/16/2016 6:00:00 PM
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I really love this one especially with the tears from the window:-( hugs Jan xx
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Darren White
Date: 10/16/2016 8:45:00 AM
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Yeah. I already did. If I didn't have a long-distance poem for the contest entered, I'd send in this one :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/16/2016 5:22:00 AM
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I hope you send him the poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Darren White
Date: 10/16/2016 4:41:00 AM
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Thank you Jan, sometimes I miss him so much....

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