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FISHING GONE HORRIBLY WRONG

casting out my line to catch the favored one only a shoe lured

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/12/2010 7:10:00 AM
Haha, that would surely be my luck if I went fishing. Enjoyed your senryu Wilma ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 9/11/2010 2:26:00 PM
A shoe?? A shoe?? Only a shoe?? tsk tsk-- maybe you'd get lucky and find the partner ;) go fish some more missy!! :) don't come back til you find the other one, lol -- enjoyed this one :)
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Date: 9/11/2010 10:59:00 AM
Hallo Wilma, was net goed eet en het daarna 'n bietjie televisie. Wil jy 'n lekker naweek! Al die beste, Gert:)
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Date: 9/10/2010 11:21:00 PM
haha. cute title for this. So glad you liked that old post of mine, the homeless woman! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/10/2010 5:01:00 PM
Wish I was on the other end of that line lol.. lovely write my sweet...love Michael
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Date: 9/10/2010 3:36:00 PM
Well Wilma, this sometimes happens!!! Funny Senryu!...Toe ons seuns en op openbare vakansiedae in Karinthië, Oostenryk ons het baie van die vissery en ons het dit baie geniet dit! ...All die beste!...Gert:)
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Date: 9/10/2010 1:02:00 PM
Hon, John was amazing and we lived on the fish he caught. He had an IQ of 165 and won three days on the TV quiz show Jeopardy. Brilliant and loving man who remains in my heart. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/10/2010 11:43:00 AM
I had a gut wrenching laugh there, thanks Wilma. Joy (Jew)
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Date: 9/10/2010 11:41:00 AM
Any day fishing even a bad one is better than the best day at work so they say..Have a great Friday..Sara
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Date: 9/10/2010 11:39:00 AM
Hah! And I think I've failed when I pull in a crab! Haven't caught a shoe yet, but this is soo funny, Wilma. Has to go in seafaress's favorites!
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Date: 9/10/2010 11:24:00 AM
That's a riot, Wilma! Funny senryu.
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Date: 9/10/2010 8:20:00 AM
Nice one Wilma, a fishermans dread. Hey! maybe it was a sole, haha. Have a great weekend >> James
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