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Standing thigh high on the riffle, Feeling the current pull at my knees. Breathing deep.. my world is calm now, Winged beauty drifting by on the breeze. My line floats out like a feather, And patiently waits a strike from below. My soul seeks the magic of water, I'm lost in its ebb and its flow. I admit its really not about catching, I don’t care if the prey is that clever. The light gently leaving the canyon, I want to hold this moment forever . Why to we fight daily battles Looking for fortune or fame? I turn from this life of unease, The river is calling my name. .

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Date: 4/30/2014 5:18:00 PM
this one is REALLY nice and how you made it about the atmosphere of fishing. Congrats on a very well deserved win.
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Date: 4/30/2014 5:32:00 AM
Very brilliant and enjoyable write on fishing. Congrats on the win, Barbara
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Date: 4/30/2014 4:53:00 AM
Beautiful poetry on fishing Barbara ! One really has to pursue some hobby to escape monotony of life ! Congrats on great win !
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Date: 4/29/2014 8:37:00 PM
Congrats on a very nice win and fantastic poem. ---ivo
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 4/29/2014 9:27:00 PM
Thank you Ivo...nice of you to stop by.
Date: 4/29/2014 5:00:00 PM
This is nice... PD
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Date: 4/29/2014 1:48:00 PM
Love this one Barbara; fishing can be so relaxing and rewarding (even when no fish are caught!). congrats on a deserved win. // paul
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 4/29/2014 9:28:00 PM
Thanks Paul, I love to fish, and really just to be on the river.
Date: 2/25/2014 8:21:00 PM
Nice, flowing poem, Barbara. Your descriptions are so vivid, I can feel the relaxation just by reading it. Maybe its like the good guy/bad guy thing...where opposites have more meaning.
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