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flashes of silver as they leap the waterfall on their way to spawn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/26/2015 3:43:00 PM
Shadow, so visual, wonderfully penned haiku 7 ( I am getting better at them) and I want to thank you so much for my wonderful placement in your Best Poem #2 Contest, I am very honored
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Date: 7/26/2015 4:09:00 PM
ty Connie hugs
Date: 7/15/2015 8:23:00 PM
Shadow. again another vivid active imagery!!~Olive ELoisa =')
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Date: 7/5/2015 4:00:00 AM
Excellent imagery write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 7/7/2015 7:23:00 PM
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Date: 7/4/2015 4:05:00 PM
wondrous scene in so small a poem,,cleverly done Shadow...
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Date: 7/7/2015 7:23:00 PM
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Date: 7/3/2015 7:18:00 PM
love nature and her way to give way to life.... Have a safe and Happy 4th of July.... ... Love SKAT
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Date: 7/7/2015 7:22:00 PM
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Date: 7/3/2015 10:10:00 AM
greeat visual with a lively end line, shadow... huggs!
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Date: 7/7/2015 7:21:00 PM
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Date: 7/3/2015 9:31:00 AM
Love the imagery, Shadow. "Flashes of silver" is perfect! hugs!
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Date: 7/7/2015 7:21:00 PM
ty Kim hugs
Date: 7/2/2015 11:24:00 PM
Very nice haiku done in perfect form. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/7/2015 7:20:00 PM
ty Matthew hugs
Date: 7/2/2015 9:23:00 PM
Love to see the fish jumping out of the river water, Shadow. You captured the scene well in your great haiku!
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Date: 7/7/2015 7:20:00 PM
ty Laura hugs
Date: 7/1/2015 11:57:00 PM
enjoyed your haiku *luv, p.d.
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Date: 7/2/2015 7:40:00 PM
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Date: 7/1/2015 2:52:00 PM
- Like your great picture, Shadow - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/2/2015 7:40:00 PM
ty Anne Lise hugs
Date: 7/1/2015 12:41:00 PM
Oh my, Shadow. Count line one. You did same thing as I did!!! This is pretty one!! (you could just leave off the word fish, since flashes of silver will be enough for us to realize what they are!!)
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Date: 7/2/2015 7:39:00 PM
I thought I answered you oh well yes I did flashing silver fish but like you changed it and forgot to check count lol ty hugs