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Fish

flashes of silver as they leap the waterfall on their way to spawn

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Constance La France

Date: 7/26/2015 3:43:00 PM

Shadow, so visual, wonderfully penned haiku 7 ( I am getting better at them) and I want to thank you so much for my wonderful placement in your Best Poem #2 Contest, I am very honored

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/26/2015 4:09:00 PM

ty Connie hugs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/15/2015 8:23:00 PM

Shadow. again another vivid active imagery!!~Olive ELoisa =')

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/5/2015 4:00:00 AM

Excellent imagery write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/7/2015 7:23:00 PM

ty Ravi hugs

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/4/2015 4:05:00 PM

wondrous scene in so small a poem,,cleverly done Shadow...

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/7/2015 7:23:00 PM

ty Harry hugs

Skat A

Date: 7/3/2015 7:18:00 PM

love nature and her way to give way to life.... Have a safe and Happy 4th of July.... ... Love SKAT

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/7/2015 7:22:00 PM

ty Skat hugs

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/3/2015 10:10:00 AM

greeat visual with a lively end line, shadow... huggs!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/7/2015 7:21:00 PM

ty Nette hugs

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/3/2015 9:31:00 AM

Love the imagery, Shadow. "Flashes of silver" is perfect! hugs!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/7/2015 7:21:00 PM

ty Kim hugs

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/2/2015 11:24:00 PM

Very nice haiku done in perfect form. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/7/2015 7:20:00 PM

ty Matthew hugs

Laura Leiser

Date: 7/2/2015 9:23:00 PM

Love to see the fish jumping out of the river water, Shadow. You captured the scene well in your great haiku!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/7/2015 7:20:00 PM

ty Laura hugs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/1/2015 11:57:00 PM

enjoyed your haiku *luv, p.d.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/2/2015 7:40:00 PM

ty Linda hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/1/2015 2:52:00 PM

- Like your great picture, Shadow - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/2/2015 7:40:00 PM

ty Anne Lise hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/1/2015 12:41:00 PM

Oh my, Shadow. Count line one. You did same thing as I did!!! This is pretty one!! (you could just leave off the word fish, since flashes of silver will be enough for us to realize what they are!!)

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/2/2015 7:39:00 PM

I thought I answered you oh well yes I did flashing silver fish but like you changed it and forgot to check count lol ty hugs