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First Thoughts

I remember right after I was born, thinking Oops! Think I just pooped myself something's stinking Wow, that was a tough go Hopefully, life's easier, whoa What's all the fuss, there's seven billion of us kicking

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/3/2018 3:35:00 PM

Did you ever think one day ill be a limerick king on soup. Good day Jack.

Tom Cunningham
Date: 12/3/2018 4:44:00 PM

Oh I wasn't referring to me, I meant you. Your first thought.

Tom Cunningham
Date: 12/3/2018 4:42:00 PM

Thanks jack, first one I did was too long , industrial action, another Santa themed one.

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/3/2018 4:12:00 PM

Just checked out your well-deserved win Mr.Tim!!! OOOOEEEEEE!!! CONGRATS... check out my comment! Again, congratulations friend!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/3/2018 8:52:00 AM

Interesting first thoughts ;) I think mine were "ooh colours, pretty!" Good morning sweet Jack! xomo <3

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/3/2018 9:02:00 AM

No one ever thinks of a newborns thoughts! Yours were very aesthetic... WOW!!! Good morning my morning sunshine during a cloudy day! Love, Happy Jack XOX