First Snow

"What neighborhood is this, we are passing?
I ask the New York Yellow Cab driver.  "Queens,"
he replies.  "I've been a lot of places," I say,
"but I've never been to Queens," where rows 
of houses, identical two-storey rectangles,
rub shoulders in urban sprawl, lining the road
to the airport past empty playgrounds--
their trees like December scarecrows, 
draped with scarves of snow.  

A small-town aura resonates in the archives 
of childhood, calling up the small town 
that shaped me.  Yet, Queens is no uncomplicated 
place, remembered in the sinews of the soul.  
Mystique covers this country of Sunday streets
where we have not cleared Customs, where 
no one we loved sleeps in cemeteries, 
flashing by car windows as fast as our lives,
their miniature necropolises dotted with grayed 
minarets, toy skyscrapers, scraping no sky, 
unlike in the city we have just left.

I've been to honor someone lost, stricken
with cancer, dying on the day we revere Pilgrims,
sit at feasts, not funerals. I  would like to know 
where you have gone, Pilgrim friend.  My 
driver cannot take me there.  He wears black, 
but has no skull face.  As we drive, he falls silent, 
listening to the static-y, disembodied voices 
on his radio.  There is no road map for where 
you are now. The eulogy has been spoken--
your ashes borne away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 3/24/2009 2:07:00 PM
Just read this one again. Hey! Send it in to the poetry soup contest. If it doesn't win you something ...well, I won't be surprised, just disgusted. This writing is first rate. Love, daver
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Date: 3/24/2009 2:03:00 PM
Nola, I cannot for the life of me understand why the lack of response. This is great stuff! You must be patient and play the game, which means you read everyone and get by with as little comment as is necessary. Myself, I don't play ball, never have, never will. Love, daver
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