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First Love

My first love was a blind date; I couldn't wait. A little nerves and it was getting late. I rushed to open the door. I tripped and fell on the floor. Date came to an end, a bit more sedate. 2/20/2023 Put Your Best (ONE) Limerick Forward (be like Rico Leffanta)' Contest Info Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich

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Date: 3/13/2023 4:22:00 PM
Hi, Eve. yours was kind of funny even with the uneven lines. Sorry I did not understand the last part: "I bit more sedate." Other than that, it had a cute feel to it! Thanks for being in my contest.
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Date: 2/22/2023 11:49:00 PM
Oops! What an end to the much awaited evening, nice one, Eve:)
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Date: 2/22/2023 2:35:00 PM
lol blind dates can be intense Eve, sending love and light
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Date: 2/21/2023 1:06:00 AM
Slow and steady wins the race. Hugs.
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Date: 2/20/2023 10:22:00 PM
Reminds me of mine, at least we can smile now! I hope!
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