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I could not let go, I was in love. She’s not for you they told me, But I was deaf and perhaps dumb. I just could not let go. She sauntered along the street, Flaunting her new dress and yet She did not look at me even though She knew I was watching her every Curve, her slim figure, her lovely eyes. Go on, they said. We dare you, Ask her out, a dinner or a dance. But I was a daydreamer and dared not. I would have hated her saying “No”. Thus the days just rambled by. Dejected I simply stared and yearned. Went to places she would frequent, Knowing she had eyes for all But she never even glanced at me. Then something sparked and I crossed To the other side of the street, Calling her name. Still dazed I did not see a car driving straight at me. The injury was slight, all would be well. For near my side she sat in anxiety Hoping we’d be able to talk And become what I had always hoped: My very first true beautiful love.

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Date: 9/2/2022 8:07:00 AM
ah, I am so glad this story had a happy ending, loved it,
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Date: 9/1/2022 5:24:00 PM
A lovely romantic story Victor, first love though it may not last stays in your heart forever, a souvenir of the past…Belle
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Date: 8/30/2022 10:23:00 PM
Straight out of a Bollywood (maybe Hollywood too) romantic film :)
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Date: 8/30/2022 6:58:00 PM
Quite a story.. a tale that could have been tragic. Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 8/30/2022 9:36:00 AM
- Love makes the earth spin a little faster ... is never powerless ... a lovely poem, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/30/2022 8:40:00 AM
So sweet a story you have told here Victor. Love hurts, they say...Linda
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Date: 8/30/2022 12:31:00 AM
What a painful way to meet a true love....
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Date: 8/29/2022 1:54:00 AM
The ending was wonderful. Support and love starts the healing process. Great theme and as always a wonderful storyline with a happy ending Victor hope you are well my friend...
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Date: 8/28/2022 11:00:00 PM
His searching eyes have been following her everywhere. But he lacked the nerves to openly tell his admiration to her ! Though he met with an accident, damaging his car badly, he found happiness in having her by his side to console him ! Love conquers all impediments ! Very well penned, dear Victor....
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Date: 8/28/2022 11:47:00 AM
You did a great job of getting her focus, Victor. I found the happy ending added a cool idea to this otherwise lovely love story. Love is alluring, regardless of the manner in which it presents itself. I found the tale of young love to be enjoyable. Blessings dear friend.
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Date: 8/28/2022 10:30:00 AM
The happy ending was a nice touch to this beautiful love tale, Victor. I hope your week is a good one, Evelyn :)
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Date: 8/28/2022 9:56:00 AM
Great write, my friend. Blessings
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Date: 8/28/2022 6:50:00 AM
Passion protected you and the injury was slight… thankfully! The gift was her presence in your journey of healing . I love reading your poems Victor . You are a great storyteller. Hugs and blessings, Susan :)
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Date: 8/28/2022 6:02:00 AM
You sure got her attention. Love is charming-- however it makes an entrance. Enjoyed the story of first love, Victor.
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Date: 8/28/2022 5:15:00 AM
Aww so lovely Victor….First love ….very romantic! Debx
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Date: 8/28/2022 2:57:00 AM
Thankfully a happy ending Victor that could have ended in tragedy. Greetings from Spain, I'm on the move again. Tom
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