First Leave Home

Hooray! I'm done with basic trainin' - I passed the rigorous test!
No more inspections, guard duty or standin' at parade rest!
No sergeants yellin' in my face, never more to be harassed!
No more parades or kitchen police, I'm headin' home at last!

I fancied myself chargin' into town astride a sleek Arabian steed,
(But I slunk into town on a Greyhound bus, I hasten to concede).
I thought I'd create some awe in my snappy Air Force suit of blue,
But folks thought I was the bus driver, a humblin' homecomin' debut!

'Twas nice to flop in my bed again with the luxury of sleepin' late,
And savor Mom's cookin' instead of chow hall grub upon my plate!
I decided to look up my old girlfriend and exude my usual charm.
Alas, when I met her, she was hangin' on some other feller's arm!

My Air Force career spanned thirty years and I've often gone home since,
But my friends frequently asked a question that always made me wince.
(I was always welcomed by old pals, neighbors and numerous kith and kin).
They admired my uniform but asked if I drove a bus much to my chagrin!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Placed No. 10 in Carolyn Devonshire's "The Work You Do" Contest - September 2010
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Dietrich Avatar
September 13, 2010 at 10:03 PM
hahahaha. Good win, Robert!!!
Fraser Avatar
September 12, 2010 at 10:48 AM
Robert, many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest with this gem >> James
Roberts Avatar
September 11, 2010 at 8:44 PM
congrats on your win with this great entry
Neels Avatar
September 11, 2010 at 8:52 AM
Bob, congratulations on your success in Carolyn's contest.. Hope your weekend is going great :) Wilma
Freeman Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 11:44 PM
I remember thoes days Bob! Congratulations on your success in the competition. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 8:10 PM
Congratulations on this win in the contest, Bob
Brown Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 5:33 PM
Congratulations on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest Robert. Love Carol
Haick Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 4:10 PM
You always make me laugh with your very interesting writes, Robert. Congratulations on your win. Hope you are well. Peace, Audrey
Sweetheart Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 3:34 PM
Congrats Bob on your winning poem in the Work contest.. enjoyed your amazing write .. u enjoy your super win this happy weekend my friend with luv..
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September 10, 2010 at 1:55 PM
I laughed when I heard they asked if you drove a bus, Bob. Our military don't get the respect they deserve. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Nealy Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 6:26 PM
very cute:) hopefully my homecoming wont be like that haha great write
Richards Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 6:17 PM
These poems can not only be poetry, but rather like a journal of one's life!! You have some marvelous stories! Nicely done! ~ Carrie
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