First Kiss

A boy moved into our small town, lived just down the way,
His British accent and lovely white smile, just made my day.

He invited me to the Easter dance and bought me a corsage
From beginning to end, the whole scene seemed like a mirage.

I wore a new white and yellow dress my Mom sewed for me,
She placed yellow ribbons in my hair, they matched perfectly.

We walked hand in hand to the dance talking about school,
Meanwhile my stomach was churning trying to stay so cool.

We swayed to Hey Jude, I thought I was in heaven for sure,
Yet scared of what would happen next - was I too immature.

Then the song ended, if there were others there I was unaware,
He moved his hands up my arms and touched my lips with care.

My expectations were high, thought I’d know love right away,
But I felt nothing, my hopes dashed, we broke up the next day.



Written August 11, 2012
For Craig Cornish’s contest
“First Kiss”
Placed second in contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Horsman Avatar
September 1, 2012 at 9:55 AM
wonderful poem on your first kiss, Lee, and the ending is a classic.
Macfarlane Avatar
August 27, 2012 at 4:49 PM
Wonderfully written.....congrats on your win!
Dietrich Avatar
August 26, 2012 at 10:57 AM
Congratulations on your big placement in Craig's contest. Very well deserved.
Kendrick Avatar
August 25, 2012 at 7:08 PM
Ahhh! So romantic and full of young love and emotions..Sad that it ended the next day..Reads like a winner for it has great flow, rhythm, and rhyme..Enjoyed reading..Thanks for stopping by with congrats...Sara
Croft Avatar
August 25, 2012 at 6:40 PM
congratulations nice poem
Guzzi Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 6:02 PM
I guess you don't expect as much when your first kiss is at 5! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Ramage Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 7:26 PM
Oh, you make me laugh, how true! thanks for your kind comments. Lee
Grisetti Avatar
August 22, 2012 at 12:56 PM
Sorry for the abrupt end to romance. Great poem. Congratulations.
Brown Avatar
August 22, 2012 at 10:36 AM
Congratulations on your win in Craig's "First Kiss" contest Lee. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 22, 2012 at 2:57 AM
Congratulations on your win and your loss xx
Pettit Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 8:21 PM
With "Hey Jude", you at least had a long dance with him. Good descriptiveness here. This write vicariously placed me at that dance.
Ramage Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 8:27 PM
Thanks so much for your kind comments. Lee
Guzzi Avatar
August 20, 2012 at 6:52 PM
Yup first kisses [or first anythings!] are seldom what they are cracked up to be! [I loved your 3 nickle idea, I for one am glad you are back and always here to help ;)] Light & Love
Aul Avatar
August 15, 2012 at 8:59 AM
Liked this one........ George
Johnson Avatar
August 14, 2012 at 8:56 PM
Really cute Lee. I didn't write one for this contest. Too many kiss contests on at the same time. I tried the other one. Thanks for your kind words. It is sad that we have to outlive so many of our family. I have my sister left and I am the last of my generation along with her. We had five brothers. My son died suddenly in 1999. I still miss him so much. Love, Joyce
Ramage Avatar
August 15, 2012 at 3:27 AM
Very true Joyce, I am sorry about your family. Even years later and I still miss my family. Take care. Makes family times all the more precious and hard. Your work is wonderful. Love Lee
Ryerson Avatar
August 14, 2012 at 6:32 PM
Aw, shoot!!... I can surly identify with the young man as the same happened to me once more or less...well done and very honest poem from you Lee...sure to be among the winners! - Tim
Ramage Avatar
August 14, 2012 at 7:49 PM
Thanks Tim for your kind comments... now they wanted honesty right? Take care Lee
Onclaud Avatar
August 14, 2012 at 3:52 AM
this must have been a downer, lee... yet, a tenderly sweet piece of art!... on to the winners' list.. i like!..:) huggs!
Ramage Avatar
August 14, 2012 at 6:20 AM
Thanks so much Nette, greatly appreciated. You're so sweet. Lee
Dietrich Avatar
August 13, 2012 at 7:15 PM
hahaha, I love this how you ended it. Yep, that sure can happen sometimes. Did you ever read the poem, jenny kissed me? It's totally opposite of this and there was another famous poem about a first kiss that was a lot like yours how it ended, but now I forgot the name of it! Anyway, sure enjoyed this.
Ramage Avatar
August 13, 2012 at 7:22 PM
Thanks Andrea, you always are so kind. I,ll go read "Jenny kissed me" , thanks again Lee
Williams Avatar
August 12, 2012 at 5:58 AM
Lee a great build up to a dissapointing end, and I don't mean the poem! I like it..good luck...
Ramage Avatar
August 12, 2012 at 6:25 AM
Everyone wants a happy ending but that's the truth.,, maybe I was too honest?
Andresen Avatar
August 11, 2012 at 10:48 AM
So sweet , but.....broke up the next day.... (?) - well done - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Ramage Avatar
August 11, 2012 at 10:54 AM
Yes, Craig wanted the truth, and that's the truth. Felt bad but it just didn't cut it. Lee
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