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First Frost

Feathered friends flee frost as first flurries flip and flop. Floating, flying flock of fair geese transform fading fall days in fixed formation. By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, 11/13/13 for Francine Roberts' Tanka Me Fall or Winter Contest

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Date: 11/24/2013 7:17:00 AM
nicely penned Rhonda....I like the alliterative verses
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Date: 11/14/2013 8:22:00 AM
I like how you did his one. I think it will do well in the contest.
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Date: 11/14/2013 3:22:00 AM
- Beautiful Rhonda! - Winter is coming crawling here too ..... brrrr ..... cold!! - Luck in contest !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/13/2013 9:56:00 PM
Wow! This is tremendous, this is a fantastic write here my friend! I really enjoyed reading this glorious poem the evening! What an outstanding piece, such a phenomenal poem this one truly is! You have expressed yourself expertly with many words starting wonderfully with the letter 'F', awesome! Great Work!!
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