First Encounter

Eyes
contact,
brief at first,
then a shy smile
as gentle blushes
tint an ivory mask,
unearthing bygone colours
long since buried ‘neath fallen stones.
A light touch of skin ignites a spark,
tentatively stirring a sleeping heart.



*** for Andrea's 'Etheree Me' contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/21/2010 7:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest "Etheree Me" Sharon. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/21/2010 2:55:00 AM
congrats Sharon :) wasn't surprised at all you made it to the winner's list, loved this etheree of yours :) --nikko :)
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Date: 6/20/2010 7:30:00 PM
I love the natural flow of this poem. The "light touch of skin ignites a spark" is certainly a rebirth of life and love. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Blessings, Joseph
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Date: 6/20/2010 7:09:00 PM
Very romantic and sweet. Congratulations o your hm. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/20/2010 3:11:00 PM
You have me smiling with this one. Nice use of imagery to share your thoughts. Congratulations on being a winner in Andrea's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 6/15/2010 1:51:00 PM
Lovely tone and voice. I really enjoyed! This should do well in the contest. -Mike
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Date: 6/13/2010 8:49:00 PM
Nicely painted picture Roger x
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Date: 6/13/2010 3:25:00 PM
The meeting anew, another well written piece Sharon. Good luck in the contest >> James
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Date: 6/13/2010 2:17:00 AM
sweet and romantic!
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Date: 6/12/2010 6:43:00 AM
A nice passionate Etheree. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 6/12/2010 6:07:00 AM
Hi again Sharon :) Really like your description of that first encounter in your etheree--you managed to capture it beautifully and your last line was a gem :) hmm I think anything to do with sleeping just catches my heart haha --nikko :)
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Date: 6/12/2010 3:46:00 AM
well written as always...
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