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First Day of Winter

the clock on the wall reads fourteen hundred hours after cease of fall so winter begins anew with snow and cold air that bites right straight through non winter clothing while clearing snow off driveway and ice of the steps stan sand

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Date: 12/23/2018 5:55:00 AM
I can feel the chill of winter as I read, We haven't got much here yet, but I know we will sooner or later. Thank you for sharing your pen, Have a wonderful day S.B.
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Sand Blown
Date: 12/23/2018 6:14:00 AM
and may you have a pleasant holiday : )
Date: 12/22/2018 9:48:00 PM
'fourteen hundred hours/after cease of fall' - how striking, really enjoyed reading this!
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Date: 12/23/2018 12:49:00 AM
thanks for the comment...was that 14:00 or 1400 : )
Date: 12/22/2018 5:46:00 PM
Hello Blown Sand, we are having a green Christmas this year. You can keep the snow. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Sand Blown
Date: 12/22/2018 6:31:00 PM
oh...we'll keep the snow alright...lucky you : )

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