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First and Last Time

A sinner cried out in pain, (under intense momentary duress) with sincere tears of repentance genuine Remorseful heart giving a bitter weep vow for the last time Confessions aired to the firmament; err prayer echoed on knees bent, truly for the first time Arising in the dawn of a new beginning, temptation calls for an afternoon visitation Thus, before evening falls, atoned dead sin has revived again And the sharp, double-edged Spirit of God has cleaved the dull mind for the last time

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Date: 10/14/2018 2:11:00 PM
Great prose Freddie, loved how you started it... the line drags people into reading it...
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Date: 10/14/2018 1:45:00 PM
Quite Profound, it happens and life is never the same. Well penned, Freddie.
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