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Poetry/Pleiades/Firefly
Copyright Protected, ID 09-1578-151-12
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written September 12, 2023
For the International Contest, Pleiades 4
Sponsor, Joseph May, Judged 09/14/2023

Second Place

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"Come and see what God has done, the amazing things he has done ... "

                          Psalm 66.5

Firefly



Firefly-  a weird insect,
fantastic flirtations, 
floating glow to enchant,
fervent garden visits,
festive entertainment,
fiery vivid spirit,
flickering like candle.
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Daisy Silk Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 9:50 PM
Oh I would love to see them in real life. Lovely piece and congratulations
La France Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 9:26 PM
Daisy, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congratulations.
Fowler Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 1:25 PM
I love this Constance. You cover it all from weird to flickering candle. Congratulations! :)
La France Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 9:27 PM
Linda, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulations.
Andresen Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 11:16 AM
- Congratulations on your win ... a beautiful candle, Constance :) - hugs
La France Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 9:28 PM
Anne-Lise, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment, hugs.
May Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 9:13 AM
Very nicely penned Constance, Congrats on your win
La France Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 9:28 PM
Joseph, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats.
Shines Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 12:59 AM
Beautiful pleiades ! All the best for the contest.Keep smiling!
La France Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 9:29 PM
Kenisha, thank you so much for the compliment and encouragement.
George Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 10:20 PM
Beautiful Pleiades.... ! I love fireflies. There used to be hundreds on a serene night earlier. Unfortunately they are fast becoming extinct! Love the line- 'floating glow to enchant' ! All the Best, dear Constance !
La France Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 9:29 PM
Valsa, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and encouragement.
Rolland Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 4:08 PM
musical and enchanting poem, thanks yann
La France Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 5:10 PM
Yann, thank you so much for the the nice comment and compliment.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 10:51 AM
Hello Constance, fireflies when in a group they light up the darkness. Love & Frienxdship, /Darlene\
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 2:38 PM
Hello Constance, you are welcome. Love & Friendship, /Darlene\
La France Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 5:11 PM
Darlene, thank you so much for the comment, love.
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