Fireflies

night fairies’ star dusts flickers gazed by dreamy eyes magically ride wrapping leaves and trees tonight in the absence of moonlight March 11,2022 9:04pm Firefly Tanka Contest Judged: 3/16/2022 8:08:00 AM Sponsored by: JCB Brul Place 1

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/17/2022 10:21:00 PM

very lovely poem. Congrats on the win.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/17/2022 9:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. Love your line, "night fairies’ star dusts." Have a great/blessed day...............

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/17/2022 4:47:00 AM

"night fairies" , "star dusts" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 3/11/2022 9:02:00 AM

Oh, the imagery of your Tanka is delightful! Brings me back to those carefree summer nights. :)Paulette

Deb M

Date: 3/11/2022 7:49:00 AM

Beautifully written Len a sweet poem. Cheers Debx