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Fire Works

an artist’s palette drapes the night sky in splodges of color a fleeting magnum opus

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/9/2010 7:16:00 AM

Great imagery, Wilma. The ever-changing colors of the sky are fascinating! Love, Carolyn

Tobey Hill

Date: 8/5/2010 1:12:00 PM

very nice...TAH

Gert W. Knop

Date: 8/5/2010 4:53:00 AM

Yes, I agree with Andrea, this would make a fine Haiku, Wilma! Enjoyed this short poem so well written! Ek wens jou 'n lekker dag! ...Gert:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/4/2010 9:42:00 PM

Visual delight Wilma.. in splodges of color.. awesome.. enjoyed this fire works display..from your pen..so gifted..with luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2010 6:56:00 PM

Great imagery, WIlma and it's almost like a haiku if you could get it a bit shorter! You could always make it into a chrystalline. Look up forms and see what chrystalline is. they are longer than haiku! LUv, Andrea

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/4/2010 6:16:00 PM

enjoyed reading today!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/4/2010 2:02:00 PM

Great write my sweet, lovely expressions and picture you give us... Luv Michael

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 8/4/2010 11:08:00 AM

Slodges of color is a striking phrase. Wilma, I wish that I had written that. This is solid and I like your word choice. Thank you as well for your kind words, Gerard

James Fraser

Date: 8/4/2010 10:17:00 AM

This is wonderful Wilma, love the word splodge >> James

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/4/2010 10:11:00 AM

enjoyed your imagery here Wilma,..p.d.

Earle Brown

Date: 8/4/2010 5:20:00 AM

Very nice. I like the immage created