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Fire for Uninspired

Pray for me red heart bleeds Giving up on turquoise dreams Can’t design a silver fishing line To pull back in passions unwind Gave up so long emerald ego for sure What use to matter doesn’t anymore Perhaps I’ll find inspiration in old age My purpose to be a warning an old maid Then I remember my favorite verse In the Bible I heard from church Rather it was more a feeling unrehearsed It’s not over until God says so get to work

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Date: 1/11/2025 2:16:00 AM
Perfect build up in this poem, and I loved how you ended your verse. Hugs.
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Karen Jones
Date: 1/11/2025 3:44:00 AM
Glad you like it Victor! Hugs returned
Date: 1/8/2025 8:13:00 PM
I say, "It ain't over 'til the Phat Lady sings.' ~ Yogi Bear
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Karen Jones
Date: 1/11/2025 3:43:00 AM
lol agreed
Date: 1/8/2025 10:32:00 AM
this is very nice. Love how you ended it up!
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Karen Jones
Date: 1/8/2025 10:41:00 AM
Thanks Andrea!
Date: 1/8/2025 10:32:00 AM
I can really relate to it too.
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Karen Jones
Date: 1/8/2025 10:41:00 AM
Really? Wow
Date: 1/8/2025 4:24:00 AM
Hi Karen, you'll always be in my prayers. xx
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Karen Jones
Date: 1/8/2025 5:29:00 AM
Thanks I need prayer. John I’ll pray for you too!

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