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Fire

~~~* Fire*~~~
The flames burn out of control. The sting of the heat burns your inner soul. Melting your memories as the fire takes control. Forcing you to remember your pass demons as the devil holds you captive by your own sins. The flames rage on and your eyes become dark and foreign. Feeling the anger as it builds within. Like a fire spreading rapidly throughout the land. Looking into your eyes I can see the fire burning you up inside.
cory long Earthly Elements contest

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Date: 8/25/2011 6:44:00 PM
With God's sweet grace, we'll put out the fire. And one day the devil will retire. Until that day of great repose. We'll all just hang on to our hose.
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Date: 8/17/2011 11:25:00 PM
Cory this is great....best of luck in the contest....smiles...chiquita
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Date: 8/17/2011 5:47:00 PM
such flaming appeal, cory.. i like this..winning wishes! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 8/17/2011 2:56:00 PM
excellent element for the contest cory.. feeling the rage and emotion of the fire and the flames ... good luck luv.. hope all is well with u ..
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