Fire

Fire Fire Flames Dance Eyes Bright Fire! Fire! Smoke Whispers Basket of Warmth Safely Wrapped Fire! Fire! Adrenaline Rises Flickers of Red Danger of Love Fire Burns Memories Fade Ashes Stay

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Emile Pinet

Date: 12/28/2019 5:35:00 PM

Congratulations Alexandra! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest. This contest was very tough to judge, for I was very strict, well done my friend, Emile.

J.R. Wren-Ingalls

Date: 12/28/2019 12:29:00 PM

I love concrete poetry! Yours is really good. Love the imagery and the page-layout, and I thought the duality of it was great. It reads, to me, as a cautionary tale of love and how it can end.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/14/2019 4:07:00 AM

This looks, feels, and thinks like fire! Welcome to Soup, Alexandra!