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Fire required for the frigid room Flames for the frozen feeble clutch Friends gazed at the rose in the gloom Forward came the ardent pink touch Fervent eyes with the warmest smile Flash poems in dark clouds awhile Frost melts with the roses abloom 17 June, 2018 For Pleiades Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Date: 6/25/2018 3:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/25/2018 9:35:00 PM
Thank you, dear Friend ...
Date: 6/24/2018 5:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Probir, great Pleiades thoroughly enjoyed reading. :))
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Date: 6/24/2018 9:21:00 AM
Thank you, Roy ...
Date: 6/23/2018 11:16:00 AM
Most interesting pleaides, Probir. Enjoyed the narrative of the rose. Congratulations.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/23/2018 11:48:00 PM
Thank you, Reason ...
Date: 6/23/2018 7:12:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Probir :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/23/2018 11:47:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi ...
Date: 6/22/2018 7:57:00 PM
Good job, Probir! CONGRATS! Janice
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/23/2018 12:12:00 AM
Thank you, Janice ...
Date: 6/22/2018 4:37:00 PM
oh this ended in such a lovely manner!! What a sweet poem, Probir. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 6/23/2018 12:12:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea ...
Date: 6/22/2018 3:58:00 PM
Nicely penned Probir..Congrats on your win..
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/23/2018 12:14:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph for the placement ...
Date: 6/18/2018 10:12:00 PM
Nicely done! -- with passion, but not over-intense. Kudos. ~ gershon
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/19/2018 12:11:00 AM
Thank you Gershon ...
Date: 6/18/2018 11:07:00 AM
Excellent Pleiades, Probir! Janice
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/18/2018 12:37:00 PM
Thank you ... The poem was looking for your appreciation ... It is happy now ...

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