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Fire

forty-nine years of desire fifty-nine: too early to retire a line in the sand On the one hand FIRE! On the other WATER ... On a sacred hill, a virgin roams with childhood companions before the Sacrifice! Mother's regret single, separated ...

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Date: 10/4/2018 10:56:00 AM
Wow , awesome
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Date: 5/5/2018 8:23:00 AM
You wowed me with this poetic gem! So much articulated within a few lines and with only a few words! Excellent pen! Best regards. Pandita
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Anil Deo
Date: 5/9/2018 8:25:00 PM
thanks so much. You are quite an accomplished poet here, amen

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