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It seems like only yesterday when your rainbow ceased The reaper’s blade turned crimson in the struggle for being Violet droplets forsaken as the final violation struck home Forgotten the pinks and the mellow the sprite resolution A life path cut short had tempted the tempest to vanish Succeeded in your premature harvest of the ultimate act In the pool of your shadow shone the blues of the past Now the bleary frost of forlorn redemption festered No longer as you lay in fine black wattle coffin beneath Lilac roses in white cotton gown of torn grace You had wished for no hymns as you felt God would not Want your bones and your soul had chosen cacophonous Drums beating funeral’s last tunes instead for the final farewell Shrieking blasts for a tsunami of tears resolved from your fear Of never making it to the shore of peacefully passing on The bleak struggle was finally over the fog gone and absolved Misty murky drenched clouds of obscurity adorned thorny Remembrance oozing from the cutting edge of demise From your heart scraped and incised from cold metal steel A cut throat message remains delivered on sanguine clots Of the grief and serrated sorrow that love could not ease the pain 12th April 2018 Ten word contest: Crimson, Forgotten, Grace, Harvest, Love,  Misty, Shadow, Shore, Tempest, Yesterday.

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Date: 4/24/2018 7:36:00 AM
Congrats, Kai, on a dark, bleak piece, well done. Viv
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 4/28/2018 3:24:00 AM
Thnak you Viv. Many wishes to you, Kai
Date: 4/24/2018 7:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this sad soulful poem of colorful imagery. Well done.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 4/28/2018 3:26:00 AM
Thank you Susan. It is another beautiful day and we are in it.
Date: 4/15/2018 6:33:00 AM
This dark write is oozing with colors. Intriguing...the black wattle coffin. Brimming with all sorts of emotion.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 4/15/2018 8:46:00 AM
Thank you Kim. My writer's group asked me whether I wrote this in the deep depressive doldrums. But I wrote it just that morning and I feel/felt absolutely wonderful. But looking back is as useful as looking forward. Many wishes to you, Kai
Date: 4/13/2018 5:00:00 PM
Oh my, it is a dark and sad one, but the imagery you used is just beautiful, Kai. WEll done! HIs words really brought out the best in many poets!
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 4/14/2018 3:39:00 AM
Thank you very much Andrea. Despite the dark theme, I really enjoyed writing this one.
Date: 4/12/2018 11:46:00 PM
Wow! Such a powerful rendering. WOW! ESPECIALLY THE LAST VERSE.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 4/13/2018 3:01:00 AM
Thank you Elaine. I appreciate that. Many wishes, Kai

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