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Finish This Verse

Roses are red Violets are blue 'Tis oft' been said So I reckon 'tis true Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved Placed No. 4 in Susan Burch's "Finish This Verse" Contest - March 2012

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Date: 3/21/2012 5:42:00 PM
Yours was just GREAT, Bob. BIg congrats.
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Date: 3/20/2012 4:19:00 PM
Nice finish to the poem. Congratulations on the win. Mike
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Date: 3/19/2012 7:21:00 PM
A witty write here by you Robert.congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/19/2012 12:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in the "Finish This Verse" contest Bob. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/19/2012 3:20:00 AM
See,....some guys JUST can't say I LOVE YOU....ha ha...are u one of 'em? ha ha..congrats on this winning lil verse, Bob. Great fun. :) Gwendolen
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Date: 3/18/2012 6:54:00 PM
Those who are not colorblind will confirm this description. Congratulations on the win Bob.
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Date: 3/18/2012 2:44:00 PM
Great idea and presentation...Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 3/18/2012 1:29:00 PM
bravo Bob and congrats on two super end lines for this one luv.. always a pleasure to read your words.. I see Broncos are still on the chart for Peyton.. wow.. and he practiced and looked great too .. good luck..
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Date: 3/18/2012 11:58:00 AM
Congratulations, Bob!!! Well Done, Sir...Well Done....Big Hugggss~Deb~
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Date: 3/18/2012 11:35:00 AM
Great finish there Bob, very funny haha, congratulations xx
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Date: 3/18/2012 9:59:00 AM
Robert, Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Date: 3/16/2012 6:23:00 AM
I like this too Robert, different. harry
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Date: 3/15/2012 8:24:00 PM
hey, now THAT is clever!!!
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Date: 3/12/2012 2:00:00 PM
Wery sweet Bob...... - Luck in contest ! - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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Date: 3/12/2012 1:32:00 PM
Hey Bob if your nursing skills are as good as your poetry skills,Vera is in good hands, take care..Dave
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