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Finding Venus

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============================ The Moon lights on her face and finding Venus there, asks Jupiter to spare a tiny bit of space that Mars soon pins in place with planets in her hair But such lace flies away when Stars begin to cross and Pluto tries to toss her to the Milky Way Though on the coming day, not minding much the loss, she'll touch the tiny scars, and find once more, the stars ============================

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Date: 8/13/2020 2:42:00 PM
I really like this! Enjoyed! xomo
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