Finding Venus
The Moon lights on her face
and finding Venus there,
asks Jupiter to spare
a tiny bit of space
that Mars soon pins in place
with planets in her hair
She's cut by ricochet
when Stars begin to cross
and Pluto tries to toss
her to the Milky Way
Though on the coming day,
not minding much the loss,
she'll touch the tiny scars,
and find once more, the Stars
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