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Finding a Shape

It can take time to find words to fit a thought, come together in a link to make known what was just a shapeless notion, a shadow trying to free itself from the dark. Perhaps a childhood hurt clawing its way out, knotted feelings slowly unraveling into names. A desire let loose from an ache. Or simply a tree growing into its dream, once cramped in a seed and sunk deep under the earth, it pushes towards the light to unfold itself in form. Existence written in trunk, bark, branch and leaf. We are all trying to find a shape to fit us, growing into time and space, some with certainty others beset by doubt, willingly or unknowingly being pulled towards the light.

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Date: 3/13/2024 4:46:00 PM
a captivating poem, Paul. I'm tired and struggling with the words to express how astounding I found your poem. Your ruminations on shapes are unique and creative. "To find a shape to fit us' is a powerful theme. Finding the 'shape of words' to create a poem...wow! I especially liked 'a desire let loose from an ache.' Acting on that could 'shape' one's life...so much I read into your words. Awesome job. Enjoy your evening, Sara
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Paul Willason
Date: 3/14/2024 10:43:00 PM
Your comments slipped through...just realised I didn't reply. This was a enjoyable poem to write...came together easily and has some meaning for me. Hence, value yr sensitive words and thoughts...so grateful for your support.
Date: 3/12/2024 10:42:00 AM
I wish we could shape the direction of our lives as easily as if we could draw a roadmap to where we wish to travel in life. There are times when we must take an unexpected detour before we reach the destination we desire. I love the poetic suggestion of personifying a shadow as though it wishes to free itself from the dark. That thought is worthy of a poem unto itself, Paul... hint hint
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Paul Willason
Date: 3/13/2024 4:59:00 AM
True words Lin...appreciate the time you have given to the poem and sharing your thoughts. Very grateful. Will try and get the muse to consider helping me on the shadow theme...some interesting possibilities.
Date: 3/12/2024 9:45:00 AM
I was grabbed from the opening lines Paul, always such beautiful expressions x
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Paul Willason
Date: 3/13/2024 4:50:00 AM
Always like to nail the opening lines...somehow they ripple through the rest of the poem...sincere thanks for dropping a few words...you're always ready with yr encouragement. Valued DD
Date: 3/12/2024 6:09:00 AM
Thought provoking and just beautiful Paul! The tree sunk deep pushing towards the light a great analogy….l felt the sense of shape and freedom in that! Debx
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Paul Willason
Date: 3/13/2024 4:47:00 AM
Many thanks Deb...your feedback is appreciated. Pleased that you found it a worthwhile read. Take care.

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