Find Me Then

Find me then. Move cautiously, stay veiled against the shadows. Trees thrash and quake, tremble and moan, a corpse turn they fear. Fervor world rush away in silence Find me then; it slices through darkness shifting smite light, a soldier clashing sword. Dread haunting feeling with anguish I stay in the shadows, find me then. 6/8/2020 1. FIND ME THEN. REPEAT THE PHRASE Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/14/2020 7:56:00 PM

ohh, i am just seeing this now, eve... so beautiful though the 6th line has 8 syls only...salute!... huggs

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/11/2020 8:09:00 AM

There's a message here I can't figure out...a lonely one...Well done

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/9/2020 8:26:00 PM

Love this dark write, Eve! Well done and best of luck in the contest. Hugs, Rhonda xx

Joe Dimino

Date: 6/9/2020 10:04:00 AM

Very mysterious. Well written. Excellent. I think we all are somewhat in the shadows, daring others to find us as we also search for self, often with trepidation...as we also wonder of true life...if we know it, or it hides in the shadows -- as our true selves, just beyond the reach of clarity....

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 6/9/2020 7:30:00 AM

A haunting poem! Stunning work Eve. xomo

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/9/2020 12:39:00 AM

Wow Eve, this indeed a powerful poem, with so much emotion, love it.