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Find Me At Six - Beneath the Blue

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Find me, my darling in m e m o r i e s past- We went a sailing one bright sunny DAY, the sweet w i n d s took us far out to sea, and suddenly, a great STORM came upon us, and I f e l l - beneath the deep blue . . . in time e t e r n a l is where you, find me. ______________________ January 17, 2017 Poetry/Free Verse/Find Me At Six- Beneath The Blue Copyright Protected, ID 17-866-820-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Find Me At Six Sponsor, Nette Onclaud Third Place

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Date: 1/26/2017 7:19:00 AM
I really love this verse!!! Congrats BW, for your placement with this wonderful piece!!! ;-)
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Date: 1/22/2017 12:52:00 PM
Oh my, how did I miss this one? It's beautiful, Constance. And congrats for your win.
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Date: 1/21/2017 11:32:00 PM
Congrats Constance.
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Date: 1/21/2017 9:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win girl :)
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Date: 1/21/2017 3:27:00 PM
Sad yet poetically delightful, Constance. I notice that you used time eternal, while I used love eternal:) ~ Congratulations on this lovely win! Regards // paul
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Date: 1/21/2017 2:04:00 PM
that sense of search is mystery-laden... lovely work, constance.. big congrats and thanks for participating
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Date: 1/18/2017 9:05:00 AM
Wings...no more invisible ink? lol...great verse just the same...god bless and luck...^WW^
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Date: 1/18/2017 7:54:00 AM
Excellent, Constance:) sure to place high:) a 7 from me:)
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Date: 1/17/2017 9:37:00 PM
I love this! It follows my own beliefs! Eternal that is! Beautifully done! /|\
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