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ebon d a r k n e s s fills my sleep and black are the corridors in my mind like veins of need searching for a passage I am lost in a sea of doors and find myself at a decaying (one) velvet hair f l o a t i n g like threads seeking an opening I gaze at the door's scars like a road map of VEINS all tangled webbed it stands like the journey of my ravaged and twisted i n k y path beyond this door- is that the sad story of me (?) MUST abandon all fear and throw open this door I can hear the obsidian voices c o m e is their dark whisper . . . slowly I step through and then I am f a l l i n g into pitch black screaming . . . _________________ May 29, 2018 Poetry/Free Verse/filled with ebon veins Copyright Protected, ID 18-1027-002-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Free Verse- Pick a Theme sponsor, Laura Loo First Place

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Date: 6/16/2018 10:17:00 PM
Wow. Awesome poem. Congrats on your well earned gold medal, BW.
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Date: 6/9/2018 6:28:00 AM
Scary nightmare, congratulations on your win. Mick
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Date: 6/8/2018 11:24:00 PM
I write rhymes but you --- you write POETRY. Oh, that I had your talent!
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Date: 6/8/2018 8:58:00 AM
Congratulations for your top win BW :)
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Date: 6/8/2018 8:18:00 AM
- A short greeting and congratulations on your great winning poem, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/8/2018 7:26:00 AM
wow! amazing poem as always sweet Broken Wings, you always reach heights and beyond...thank you and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 6/3/2018 6:22:00 AM
Dark scary thoughts BW. If only we knew what awaits us on the other side of the door.
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