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Filled With Ebon Veins

ebon  d a r k n e s s  fills my sleep
and black
are the corridors in my         mind
like veins of need searching for a passage

I am lost in a sea of         doors
and find myself at a decaying (one)
velvet hair  f l o a t i n g
like threads seeking an opening

I gaze at the door's scars
like a road map of   VEINS all tangled      webbed
it stands
like the journey of my ravaged
and twisted  i n k y  path
beyond this door-    is that the sad story of me (?)

MUST abandon all fear and throw open this door
I can hear the obsidian         voices
c o m e        is their dark whisper . . . 
slowly     I step through and then   I am    f a l l i n g
into pitch black   

screaming . . .  

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May 29, 2018


Poetry/Free Verse/filled with ebon veins
Copyright Protected, ID 18-1027-002-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest, Free Verse- Pick a Theme
sponsor, Laura Loo

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 10:17 PM
Wow. Awesome poem. Congrats on your well earned gold medal, BW.
Talbot Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 6:28 AM
Scary nightmare, congratulations on your win. Mick
Moorman Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 11:24 PM
I write rhymes but you --- you write POETRY. Oh, that I had your talent!
Sands Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 8:58 AM
Congratulations for your top win BW :)
Andresen Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 8:18 AM
- A short greeting and congratulations on your great winning poem, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Scars Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 7:26 AM
wow! amazing poem as always sweet Broken Wings, you always reach heights and beyond...thank you and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Inman Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 6:22 AM
Dark scary thoughts BW. If only we knew what awaits us on the other side of the door.
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