Fight For Your Love and Rights

living in the flame 
rideing on top of that tidal wave
the invisible waves, rushing through
the saltless hot beachy sand 
Looking ahead as i saw that beautiful squeaky flippin  dolphin 
stars spinning ahead, darkeness rushing in the tideless
freedom land 
once again im with nature the water is my tears 
when i accidently let go of my hope .
like a sailboat i sank .
thunder of  volts in my eyes you shall see 
bright lightning gets brighter in theat muscial sky .
o nothing butthe wood wind chimes with the angels singing 
you can hear it peacefully if you sat back down 
turned your mirror facing you back around.
face to face woth my own self.
i looked deeply inside this time 
thanks heavenslittle dragonfly;s that this second spent 
i took ot to heart .
 i saw who i finally was meant to be , 
beautiful the insight as i rose to my feet .
rember the wood  windchimes in the wind , 
they always bring you back to your own crazy foolish mind 
sometimes it gets erased by time.
every now and then you have to get up and try to fight for your rights in this flameing hell i call earth .
it can take away your heart 
the creatures in it they try to pull you away from your own self .
turn the page , look deeper dont ley anyone get to close to your heart so they can stab it deeper , protect your love .
flameing candle burning in the moonlight god sent my baby angel back to her nest we can finally rest. God has our place here. Overcoming hope is what makes you stronger for gods next battle belive stay humble

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Date: 2/27/2018 12:45:00 AM
Excellent metaphorical write with good advice for fighting the rights............ thanks
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Date: 7/30/2017 1:02:00 PM
Beautifully wrote "Ashley" - no worries about the mis - spells the message is loud and clear - the rest will come with time - Kind regards - Indiana x x x
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Ashley Rainwater
Date: 9/29/2017 11:33:00 AM
thank youuu:)))
Date: 7/29/2017 1:52:00 AM
A very beautiful written poem, well I thought that your poem of love was good but this is the best one, well if someone read your poems from first to last, it s evident that you ve improved alot, just recjheck a little mistakes, it also happens with me, writing O instead of I as I write quick and both of them are close, anyway I like this poem alot, don t ask me why, because it s good, and do me a favour, plz read my poem, I ve taken permission from the God to love you, and give your reviews
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Date: 7/26/2017 11:44:00 AM
Excellent write. Enjoyed it immensely. Nice imagery.
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Ashley Rainwater
Date: 7/26/2017 11:55:00 AM
thnk you
Date: 5/19/2017 8:35:00 PM
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Date: 5/19/2017 7:38:00 PM
wonderful huh?
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Ashley Rainwater
Date: 5/19/2017 7:48:00 PM
really i never knew that he wrote like that . intresting made my day hearing that lol i wanna publish all of mine 1 day into like a diary book . well thank you that was nice of you god bless you :)
Date: 5/19/2017 7:38:00 PM
reminds me of bob marley....i cant tell you if he rode a harley....but he often spoke of Love and the struggles of man's flaw....and these words are some of the most encouraging i ever saw....me likes ashley....;)
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Ashley Rainwater
Date: 5/19/2017 7:53:00 PM
its all bout freedom to me anyway witch i think this world is contolled by goverment . we arnt free even tho its suppost to be land of the free ya know my opinion by the way we are all brainwashed into this society ..
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