Field of Glory

Heaven and earth unite Clouds rest on the horizon Tree points its shadow For Raul's Haiku contest...

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 7/4/2009 11:25:00 PM

My Dearest Barbeeg, Barbara Jean, Congrats I believe this is a Winner Good Luck ( I don't think YOU really need Luck) this a pure work of Art This is the written Picture in Raul's Contest All My LOVE ALWAYS...HG

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/3/2009 3:50:00 PM

Great Haiku. Sara

Daver Austin

Date: 6/27/2009 1:23:00 PM

Great double image, Barb. daver

Date: 6/27/2009 9:03:00 AM

Interesting view. I really like the last line. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comment on my poem. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/27/2009 8:27:00 AM

Lovely entry to Raul's contest. Nicely done! :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/27/2009 5:16:00 AM

beautiful entrance for the contest---awesome------charma

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/26/2009 9:03:00 PM

earth-shaking haiku! go Barbara!!! jim