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Fib

Fib
I 
Told him
Lying game
The lie expanded
Now can not keep all those lies straight

Sponsor: David Williams
Contest: Twenty/Twenty
Poetry form: Fib
Written by: Sara Kendrick
20 syllables

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2012

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Kim Merryman Date: 3/9/2012 5:32:00 PM Congrats on your win, Sara! Love, Kim Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/7/2012 10:18:00 AM SARA,,... A VERY LATE .Congratulations ON MY 2ND PLACE CONTEST.. THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest...much enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 3/7/2012 7:20:00 AM Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "2nd Place Poems Only" contest Sara. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 3/6/2012 5:57:00 PM Big congrats my dear Sara. Hugs Michael Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/6/2012 4:57:00 PM congrats Sara on a lovely write and win in PD's contest of winning poems luv.. Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 3/5/2012 8:51:00 PM Congrats on your win, sara! You could not have written it better. One lie can spiral out of control. Blessings, Rhonda Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 3/3/2012 10:51:00 AM Sol true what you say here, Sara-- yup how crazy one lie can be since it leads to such chaos. Super congrats on your super write! :D Login to Reply

Ralph Taylor Date: 3/3/2012 7:53:00 AM Congrats, Sara. Excellent piece. Nice going. hugs, Ralph Login to Reply

Gautami Phookan Date: 3/3/2012 1:03:00 AM There is absolute truth here about fibbing... a very good one. Congrats Sara on your fabulous win...love to you, gautami Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/2/2012 11:41:00 PM good one, drawing on that idea of spinning a web of deceit! congratulations, Sara. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/2/2012 7:55:00 PM SARA... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd Login to Reply

Olusegun Arowolo Date: 3/2/2012 5:51:00 PM Nice work,Sara.You presentation is unique..Congratulations on your win in David`s contest.... Login to Reply

Samual Ronthorpe Date: 3/2/2012 4:16:00 PM Sara, I loved this. That's why I don't lie, it is way too hard to keep things straight. Well done. Congrats on making David's winners' list.....................S.Ronthorpe Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 3/2/2012 11:01:00 AM I BIG reason why I chose not to lie! Congrad's Light & Love Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/2/2012 9:52:00 AM so creative,sara.. best cheers to you on your smashing win!..:) hugggs! Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/2/2012 9:24:00 AM congrats Sara on a super win for these wise lines of truth luv.. lies have short legs for sure luv.. Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 3/2/2012 6:32:00 AM So very true Sara.Enjoyed.Congrats on your win. Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 3/2/2012 5:46:00 AM Congratulations Sara xx Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 3/2/2012 5:35:00 AM Congratulations on your win in David William's "Twenty/Twenty" contest Sara. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 2/27/2012 12:28:00 PM Yes, lies always snowball, don't they? My gran used to say, 'Liars always get found out.' Lovely fib poem : ) Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 2/25/2012 8:51:00 PM Oh, how I know this is true Sara! I've been caught in a lie a couple of times by the stories becoming entangled and showing my lie! It's always best to not tell the lie in the first place! That way you don't get into these messes! This is a wonderful poem that I read this evening! Great Work!! Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 2/25/2012 4:45:00 PM Yep, tried to tell that to my children when they were fibbing. lol. I sure enjoyed this one. BG Login to Reply

Black Eyed Susan Date: 2/25/2012 4:06:00 PM I'm not sure I totally get this. i get the last line but i'm having trouble connecting it all. it is probably just me. anyway, I like how your sentence lengths expand like the lie :) Login to Reply