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Fever

Who put the ice cubes in my shoes? It is ninety degrees, strange I feel so cold... How long did I sleep? It is dark outside, is today Wednesday? If I move it will hurt, so I'll just stay here, Who's calling please? Oh the hospital, yes I have been walking and using the breathing device. My thermometer must be broke it says my temp. is one hundred point five. What? Hey honey... I am fine, I am just cold... Why should I call the doctor?? Well he said let him know when the funeral arrangements are, he might come to the services. (I am ok really-just came to my mind.)

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Date: 11/22/2009 2:05:00 PM
Fever can play so many tricks on the mind and ones body >> kool poem Doris >> James
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Date: 11/17/2009 8:16:00 AM
well done creative writing Doris! Thanks for the donuts, I love them! :) pours you a fresh cup of coffee...
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Date: 11/16/2009 7:28:00 PM
Very cute...enjoyed... hope you're still doing okay....Marty
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Date: 11/14/2009 3:42:00 PM
Had me going on this one. Hope that you are stronger. Thanks for the comments on my poems and writings.The snow on the ground is the white sasanqua camellia dropping its petals after all that rain. Keep writing. Mom
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Date: 11/14/2009 1:21:00 PM
Good one!! Doctors are the last to know sometimes..
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Date: 11/14/2009 11:49:00 AM
Doris, I'm sending good thoughts your way, smile. I remember after my surgery it was hard to just rest cause your mind says one thing and your poor body says another. I went through my whole dvd list. Wrote several poems and caught up on correspondance. Love your sense of humor hun keep it up, it helps!! Love Light Patty
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