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Ferris Wheel

Boys should smell like popcorn, freshly cut grass and the rusting bolts of an October ferris wheel. Love should feel like hot funnel cakes with powdered sugar,Messy like candied apples running down your chin. Filling you up way too much and having you taste warm sugar. You not wanting the delicious smell to fade or the scrumptious taste to disintegrate. Rides are thrilling, and scary but the boy smelling like popcorn, freshly cut grass and rusting bolts of Ferris wheel is holding on to you like he will never let you fall.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/1/2012 7:20:00 AM
welcome to poetry soup...Wonderful work and congrats on feature....Patrick
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Date: 4/17/2012 5:03:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Blaine. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/16/2012 2:12:00 PM
awesome poem! welcome to poetrysoup!!!
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Date: 4/16/2012 1:07:00 PM
Welcome to the soup Blaine, loved your poem, great description! keep upthe great work, and write, write, write! oxox Laila
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