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Feeling Hot Hot Hot

He wanted it hot with lots of spice 
Not sugary sweet and tasting nice 
Oh big boy you're a looker  
We had sex on the cooker
I’m so pleased I took your advice

Jan Allison
17th September 2014

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Paul Callus

Date: 9/23/2014 3:29:00 PM

Lots of hot wittiness in this limerick, Jan! Is a recipe available? Thanks for the laugh:) hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 9/23/2014 3:31:00 PM

LOL Paul - google Delia Smith she may have something hot and spicy for you LOL Hugs Jan xxx

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 9/22/2014 8:06:00 PM

A very good one Jan! *grinning* lol. Hugs! xxxx D.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/23/2014 1:05:00 AM

LOL Dorian I am glad I made you smile:-) Hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/20/2014 10:26:00 AM

OH BABY! HOT is the WAY TO GO!!! Oh the cooker! YOU GO GIRL! ;)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/20/2014 11:00:00 AM

LOL Eileen its just a fun write - i blame Tim and Casarah they are SUCH a bad influence on me;-) Hugs Jan xxx

Robin Davis

Date: 9/20/2014 12:00:00 AM

Jan This poem is making my glasses fog up reading it from the heated passion. LOL thank you for the nice comment on my Summer Sleeps

Jan Allison
Date: 9/20/2014 2:21:00 AM

LOL Robin I guess it can get hot in the kitchen! Hugs Jan xxx

Aiyah Torres

Date: 9/19/2014 3:43:00 PM

sizzling poem, Jan... haha ^_^

Jan Allison
Date: 9/19/2014 3:57:00 PM

LOL Aiyah we were having a fun time writing limericks a couple of nights ago:-) I can pin the blame solely on Tim and Casarah for inspiring me to join in ;-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/18/2014 10:20:00 PM

hahaha. LOVE it, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/19/2014 1:56:00 AM

LOL Andrea think I've got the hang of these now LOL:-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/18/2014 7:03:00 PM

I hope that did not sound rude. I am so sorry if it read harsh. You know I can't thank you enough for how kind you have always been.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/18/2014 7:08:00 PM

No worries Maurice I would never think that - i will log out and come back in see if that makes any difference

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/18/2014 7:01:00 PM

Another 7. What do you mean you can't see the picture. It took me hours to find one because we are two males and two females. Oh well at least Cas saw it. It is four feathers in appropriate colors. I chose that picture because I thought of it as the feathers on their hats.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/18/2014 7:07:00 PM

I've been on to the page twice Maurice i cant see feathers on your top poem:-( Hugs JAN XX

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/18/2014 6:20:00 PM

The ice cubes are sizzling here. Zzzzzzzzz. You ain't hot you HOT.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/18/2014 6:22:00 PM

LOL Brenda its total fiction as ever :-) Hugs Jan xxx

Elizabeth Smith

Date: 9/18/2014 5:57:00 PM

That is a cooking show not to be missed It was not by hot peppers that she was kissed HaHa

Jan Allison
Date: 9/18/2014 6:03:00 PM

LOL :-) Hugs Jan xxx

Elizabeth Smith

Date: 9/18/2014 5:36:00 PM

That is a cooking show you won't see on TV??

Jan Allison
Date: 9/18/2014 5:40:00 PM

LOL that is a comment that made me laugh out so loud:-) hugs Jan xxx

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 9/18/2014 4:30:00 PM

I'm not sure what's in that cooker, But Jan, maybe you should simmer down Lol

Jan Allison
Date: 9/18/2014 4:40:00 PM

LOL thanks Jerry:-) Hugs Jan xx

Seren Roberts

Date: 9/18/2014 2:59:00 PM

Hope your pot boileth over....lol.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/18/2014 3:03:00 PM

LOl I guess it may get a little steamy if the cooker is actually on Seren LOL :-) Hugs Jan xx

J. R. Corbin

Date: 9/18/2014 10:29:00 AM

You go, girl! ;)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/18/2014 11:03:00 AM

LOL JR thanks for the comment:-) hugs Jan xxx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/18/2014 1:55:00 AM

hmmmm.Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 9/18/2014 3:32:00 AM

LOL Thanks for dropping by Dr Mehta:-) Hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/17/2014 4:52:00 PM

Woohoo Jan makin' hot!!! lets keep going and Sizzle!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/17/2014 4:54:00 PM

LOL its bringing a bit of fun to the spice of soup hugs Jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/17/2014 4:49:00 PM

This is great, now I feel left out. No way I am writing a limerick right now. Takes a little study and worse what if I like writing them. I can't keep with me as it is. Great job Jan, HOT HOT HOT!!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/17/2014 4:50:00 PM

I adore the humour of limericks Maurice - the bawdier the better seem to do well in Roy Jerden's contests:-) hugs Jan xx