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Feel the Attraction

Paint this picture Made of words Make blue sky, This storm of birds Paint, brush, Canvas, action Words made Upon this paper, Now, you feel The attraction

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/12/2008 6:45:00 AM
Very picturesque and vivid! Nice job! Brgds. george
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Date: 10/11/2008 5:47:00 AM
Hi Gregory, this left me so happy. Ah loved to see a landscape of sky capturing the storm of birds and all painted through WORDS. You have surely cherished just not the paper but all the readers:) Smile, Chitra
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Date: 10/11/2008 3:48:00 AM
Lovely Gregory. You painted a picture with the words as your paint and the paper your canvas!!! (if I'm right) Well done Peace Fathima
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Date: 10/11/2008 3:40:00 AM
Love this poem and the love between words and the paper.
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