Feeding the Ducks

The bread bin been raided, dungarees on
Down to the park with the ducks and  my mum.
Dandelions and Daffodils decorate the bank.
Big dogs and little dogs staging fake fights.

Daisy chains necklaces made for fun,  petals pulled off, love me, love me not
I'm down in the park feeding the ducks. 
Dads down on the bank side drowning a maggot. 
I'm sat on a pier with my dangling  legs, just  feeding the ducks.

Ducklings are quacking and following mum 
The drake diving for food and fine dining on grubs
The day light is fading and my mind wonders off
And I remember reading Beatrix Potters books  
 

And just  can't  help but  wonder if  this is the original jemina puddleduck
These days are for dreaming and feeding the ducks
As daddy long legs dance on the pond   
and then it's time for dinner and a nice drive home .

04052016 comp entry
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A  Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 12:57 AM
enjoyed your write Stephen
Pennell  Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 3:30 AM
many thanks for having a read skat , stephen
Allison Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 8:06 AM
Love the imagery especially of dad drowning a maggot - that raised a smile:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Pennell  Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 8:39 AM
yeah never said Im going fishing it was always going to drown a maggot lol cheers jan
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