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Candid he was and they were,
Told me things I had never heard before,
Most of the stuff I heard,
Was bitter and stung like stings,
I called them prejudiced and furious,
And returned several things about and concerning them,
That I do not remember what I returned,
Shows that my reply was off the cuff and excited,
They had began gradual and stayed so,
Till the time they had done me full,
I still hear them say all that word by word,
Wait perhaps they were right here..and,
Right there ..as well ..perhaps,
They were all correct about me,
Hell I cant help their being right,
Because in the time I realized that they were perhaps correct,
I had gathered more stings deep inside.
Copyright © Shishir Gupta | Year Posted 2005
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