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Feathers-Haiku

FEATHERS/haiku icy chips of life wisps of yesterday adrift fog lifts at sunrise John G. Lawless 7/12/2015 submitted to – Feathers The Haiku – poetry contest sponsor – SKAT A

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Laura Leiser

Date: 7/21/2015 2:50:00 PM

Unusual and creative imagery in this one, John. Very good and congrats on your win :)

Eve Roper

Date: 7/16/2015 5:55:00 PM

The imagery is incredible a 7 and congratulations on your wonderful win. Hugs Eve

John Lawless
Date: 7/16/2015 6:45:00 PM

Thanks Eve for the high praise and high mark

Jan Allison

Date: 7/16/2015 10:55:00 AM

beautiful imagery John many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

John Lawless
Date: 7/16/2015 6:45:00 PM

Thank you Jan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/16/2015 12:02:00 AM

John, I just love the middle and the last lines of this one. It really had that haiku flavor!!! congrats on your win.

John Lawless
Date: 7/16/2015 6:46:00 PM

perhaps Ben and Jerry's will develop that "haiku' flavor....thanks as always Andrea for you continuing support

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/15/2015 11:20:00 PM

John, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

John Lawless
Date: 7/16/2015 6:46:00 PM

Thanks Linda.

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/15/2015 11:10:00 PM

Great atmospheric write, John. Well done. Regards, Viv

John Lawless
Date: 7/16/2015 6:47:00 PM

Thanks Viv

Skat A

Date: 7/15/2015 10:49:00 PM

John:) Congratulations on your awesome feather win. **SKAT**

John Lawless
Date: 7/16/2015 6:47:00 PM

Thanks SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/12/2015 5:31:00 PM

beautiful!

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/12/2015 8:37:00 AM

THis is so visual, good luck in contest...

John Lawless
Date: 7/16/2015 6:48:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by Harry.