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Feather Prediction

FEATHER PREDICTION ~ ~ light ~ sails a plume plucked in air bride traces its fate whimsical wind commands a waltz halts in mid-step, releases her waist, lets her down slow smitten, the pretty lady catches the feather on her white glove, a wedding day kiss ~ 1/26/2017 ~

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Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 2/3/2017 12:06:00 PM

Free flowing and lovely. Well done fibonacci. Congrats on your win.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/3/2017 3:07:00 PM

Thank you!

Constance La France

Date: 2/2/2017 9:28:00 PM

Kim, congratulations on your win in my contest ~

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/2/2017 10:08:00 PM

Thank you, Constance! It was fun to learn a new form!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/2/2017 10:07:00 PM

Thank you, Constance! It was fun to learn a new form!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/30/2017 3:19:00 AM

Wow! Your Fibonacci on feather is really beautiful, Kim:) a 7:) I love the word play on the title too:)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/30/2017 6:51:00 AM

Thank you so much, Jo! I shared it with my recently married cousin-in-law. She enjoyed it.

Darren White

Date: 1/27/2017 3:11:00 PM

Hah! Only this morning I discovered that you could actually find a Fibonacci-format on PS and now I see you wrote one too, such coincidence. I love Fibonacci sequences, so now I'll have to honor him with a poem :)

Darren White
Date: 1/28/2017 1:18:00 AM

And then I forget telling you how much I like your poem... great work Darren.... >.<

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/27/2017 3:28:00 PM

Funny how those things happen! :)