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Fears

I made a journey through the thickets In a forest deep down the red woods The sun rays set on my shaved head A sound of the rattle snake startled me Which made me jump in fear With every touch on my bare skin Of leaves and grass under my feet. I trebled in fear when the shrubs moved With every shaking leaf of the woods Darkness started to settle in quietly Without even making a hissing sound The lights in the clouds faded away Like a candle fades out its light With its last drop of the melting wax. I walked for a while I heard a roar Of a lion heading towards my direction Gasping for the air I couldn't breath In between my fears and bravely I reached my breaking point Screamed my mouth off my face And heard the roar fading away. For a moment I laughed and shed tears Tears of joy that I was safe and sound I screamed again just to make sure That I was not screaming in a dream But screaming in reality of my fears And it is then that I knew that my fears Are the blocks blocking my very life From moving ahead against the storms Which blocks my way to victory.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/5/2012 11:38:00 PM
I could see the nightmare all before my mind's eye. This poem is all too inspiring! Once again, thank you for posting your beautiful poetry for us to read! I love the last stanza, how well you wrapped it up. Because the worst nightmares are usually in our reality. Excellent message. I'm inspired. Always, Laura
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Bernard Wachira
Date: 11/6/2012 12:39:00 AM
THANKS A LOT LAURA. I APPRECIATE IT SO MUCH.
Date: 10/18/2012 1:37:00 AM
Great write Bernard! I love the way you've described the fears and the conclusion you've made in regards to fear and its effect on individuals realizing their full potential. Nice!
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Bernard Wachira
Date: 10/18/2012 1:23:00 PM
THANKS A LOT VICKY. I APPRECIATE IT

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