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Fearing the Storm

Is rain on the way since the sky is gray? Thunder roars, so yes, it's headed this way. If lightning bolts spark the sky, will you fear? That's my reaction when it strikes too near. I see the hovering of nimbus clouds. They're wearing dark cloaks like funeral shrouds. I just felt the first drops of falling rain. They sting like fire nettles, causing great pain. Is the wind blowing things helter-skelter? The storm approaches: we must take shelter. I see a flock of starlings taking flight. They're fleeing from squalls coming in the night. I'm quivering like a tremulous bird. This weather rends your nerves until they've stirred. It's drawing closer with each thunderous roar! Take courage. We've been through tempests before. If a tornado comes, what should we do? To the basement until the threat is through. I should kindle a fire to warm the room. That's a good thought to get rid of the gloom. I'm worried shingles will blow off the roof. This house has been through worse weather as proof. Is it possible there will be a flood? Trust me. There's sure to be puddles of mud. Isn't it strange that storms arrive in the night? That seems to be true, but we'll be alright. I must sound like a whining worry wart. That thought would never cross my mind, sweetheart. Ignore my ramblings, but I cannot sleep. There's chamomile tea. I'm letting it steep. I think the wind is dying down at last. Thank goodness. It appears the worst has passed. I want to thank you for staying with me. There is no place else I would rather be. August 17, 2022 Dot Your I's and Cross Your T's Contest Sponsored by Hilo Poet syllable count checked with howmanysyllables

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Date: 8/18/2022 11:07:00 AM
Awesome Jenna. The storm with beautiful imagery. Please send some to East Texas where it also just thunders and drizzles! GL in the contest! Linda
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/25/2022 6:20:00 PM
Thank you SO much, Linda. Still raining here, but by now I think you've had a good share of that tropical system.
Date: 8/18/2022 5:44:00 AM
Great imagery, it’s supposed to storm here the next couple of days.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/18/2022 6:12:00 AM
I could use some rain here. It's always in the forecast but never amounts to more than thunder and drizzle. Thanks for the visit and comments.
Date: 8/17/2022 8:29:00 PM
Wow You really put me there in this coming storm Jenna. Your words were expressed giving the reader all the emotion to fear this storm. Best wishes in the contest...
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/17/2022 8:59:00 PM
Thanks ever so much for such a great comment, Michael.
Date: 8/17/2022 3:32:00 PM
Jenna, your poem is wonderful and perfect for the contest, best of luck in the contest ~
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/17/2022 3:45:00 PM
I'm so glad you think it stands a chance. We'll see, and thank you, Constance.
Date: 8/17/2022 10:35:00 AM
Delightful couplet Jenna!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/17/2022 12:35:00 PM
Thanks very much, James.
Date: 8/17/2022 9:24:00 AM
Delightful, Jenna. You have aptly described the approach of a storm, precautions to be taken, and aftermath. And, you dotted all your i's and crossed all your t's. I see you doing well in the contest.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/17/2022 12:35:00 PM
lol Thank you for your approval, Mr. Hankins, sir! I always enjoy your remarks, Milt.
Date: 8/17/2022 8:48:00 AM
Sounds like the mother of all storms is heading your way Jenna. We had torrential rain last night with thunder and lightning, after our heatwave it was so welcome. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/17/2022 12:34:00 PM
Nothing but sunshine today, Tom. I thought this contest was interesting with its requirements, so I decided to write it as a narrative, only to satisfy contest rules it had to be listed as couplet form. I love storms. Thanks for good contest wishes.

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