Fear

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This is a Modern Cinquain

Line 1- One word (the title)

Line 2- Two words that describe the title

Line 3- three words that tell the action

Line 4- four words that describe the feeling

Line 5.- one word which recalls the title

FEAR Hiding serpents Kissing with fangs Leaving us to death Poison

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/15/2022 1:26:00 PM

Great metaphor in this cinquain; well done.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/14/2022 8:27:00 PM

Here's a thought for you: It's not the snake that kills; it's sin. ~ Go ahead, Let the Asp TRY to bite me.

Debra L Brown

Date: 2/14/2022 7:54:00 PM

That's a very interesting form. But you certainly have created an excellent poem that fits the form. Well done, my friend ~ Debra

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 2/14/2022 10:29:00 AM

Interesting form. I have done the classic version....I will have to try this modern one. Your Cinquain reflects the betrayal that we can experience in some relationships~Great Write! Happy Valentine's Day! :)Paulette