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Father Christmas had a great beard But now this is where it got weird So hidden in his bristles Were several tin whistles Well, hidden until he was sheared

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2023 1:23:00 PM

this is so cute. Dilly Dally. Congrats on the winner list.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/14/2023 3:07:00 PM

Many thanks Andrea, I'm pleased I learnt how to write limericks - that can be such good fun. Thank you for your kind words x

Joseph May

Date: 12/13/2023 1:35:00 PM

Lol, Nicely done, Congrats on your win

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/13/2023 2:39:00 PM

Many thanks Joseph, much appreciated

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/13/2023 12:25:00 PM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this fun/creative Limerick write again. Have a fun day...........

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/13/2023 2:39:00 PM

Thank you Paula - glad it was funny twice :D

Speaks Volumes

Date: 12/5/2023 7:48:00 PM

Yup Belle is right 9 reindeer. Great Limerick D. I'll bet Dasher Dancer Prancer and Vixen Comet Cupid Donner Blitzen and Rudolf loved it too. :)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/6/2023 11:09:00 AM

Ahh they are worried who to trust after the whistle event haha

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 12/5/2023 10:04:00 AM

The day that Santa Clause shaved off his beard - As expected nine tin whistles appeared - One for each reindeer - The message is clear - At Christmas time money soon disappears…… Belle

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/5/2023 11:24:00 AM

Haha - I'm counting reindeer on my fingers now Belle :)

Eric Ashford

Date: 12/5/2023 9:27:00 AM

Love a good seasonal limerick Dilly thanks for the smiles. E

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/5/2023 9:41:00 AM

Haha I'm a poetic chancer of course :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/5/2023 7:23:00 AM

What a fun/creative Limerick write. Watch out for what is hidden... Have a great/blessed day................

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/5/2023 11:23:00 AM

Thanks Paula, glad you liked it